Friday, 7 September 2018

Show not Tell


This week we have been working on describing and we have been focusing on show not tell. Our teacher gave us a picture of a scared cat and then we had to describe it with out telling that the cat was frightened or scared. I kind of liked the activity because you got to write paragraphs and I like writing paragraphs. We had to use our senses, simile or metaphor and precise nouns, verbs and adjectives to describe.  Can you find my simile?




1 comment:

  1. I am glad you enjoyed this task. I like the use of "fur puffing liking a puffer fish", that helped me imagine that it was scared. :-)

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