last week we went to the Brunner mine so the next week/this week we have been working on making poems about it. We had to describe the mine and use at least 1 language feature out of 6 there was onomatopoeia, similes, metaphor, alliteration, rhyme, and personification. I liked this activity because it pushed me to write a poem because i don't really like writing them.
Hi Aoife, you have done well here with comers and full stops. Remember we always start with a Capital letter for the start of a sentence :-) I am so sorry I missed you reading this out at Assembly. I look forward to you reading it to us here at home :-)
ReplyDeleteKia ora Aoife its Ruby in totatra 4. I really like your poem cause it has what happend in the brunner mine. I like the way you added rhyme cause it makes sense and it sounds really interesting. From your friend Ruby Coppins.
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