Friday, 3 August 2018

My Treasure


WALT: Use conjunctions to join our ideas together.
WALT: Include descriptive detail.

 This week we had to describe a personal treasure. What we did was we had to use at least a couple of fanboys on our paragraphs in our slides. I think that this task was interesting and fun and made me think more on description. I think I was ok at this task although I think I could do better at it. I think what I could do better next time is that I could describe my object even more and do bigger paragraphs. My precious/treasure item is my teddy bear as you probably saw in the slide. 

 Comment below what your treasure/precious item is. 
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  1. Yvette Roche18 August 2018 at 12:31

    Hello Aoife, I enjoyed reading about your much loved teddy bear. I would have loved to see a photo of her, to see if it matches what you described :-) thanks

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